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Post by Caitlin on Apr 6, 2005 14:15:05 GMT -5
Nothing wrong with it, I like it! Only thing is the typos and grammatical errors. The wording and imagry is good. And I can't wait to see what happens next! <--me riveted
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Post by Skylar on Apr 6, 2005 16:24:57 GMT -5
Oh! Typos! Thank you thank you thank you! When I was typing it up, I was actually half asleep, hehe. I'm going to have to fix that....
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Post by Danielle on Apr 16, 2005 17:48:58 GMT -5
It's good and all! I like how you make everything seem just so fragile! But for serious constructive critisism: There are a ton of loner elf women out there... so it's taking away the originality of the whole story. But It's a wonderful peace, nonetheless!
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